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The Feind House: Part Twelve

3/13/2016

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The Feind House
Written & Created by Kenny Stark Udar
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Marissa could audibly be heard swallowing as she steeled herself for her descent into that eerie basement. It was darker than the rest of the house and when Marissa entered it; her flashlight cut a pitiful beam of light through the darkness. She stepped off the last step of the staircase she heard something crunch beneath her foot. She froze and lowered the camera and flash light to reveal what she had stepped on. She let out a cry of utter terror at what she found.

Scattered across the basement floor like a macabre carpet were thousands of tiny bones from various small animals. She lifted her foot to discover that she had stepped on a bird skull. “Keep yourself together,” Marissa said to herself, the camera shaking unsteadily in her hand. In the darkness off to her left, the young girl heard the sounds of more bones snapping. She swung her camera and flashlight over just in time to see a tall man with yellowed teeth and clouded blue eyes bearing down upon her, long broken and blackened fingernails reaching for her throat. The girl dropped her camera and flashlight in terror. 

The light revealed a grim looking alter soaked in blood, adorned by twin crimson deer skulls on either side. Marissa kicked and screamed, but was overpowered easily by the madman. With a sharp blow to the back of her head, Marissa fell limp in the man’s arms. He slowly lifted the unconscious girl to the grotesque altar and set her down. He reached into the bones beneath and procured a sharpened bone in his left hand. He raised his arm high above his head, and began to chant in a strange and unearthly tongue, one that sent chills down the spine, and made flesh crawl. The man’s chanting grew louder and louder, and he plunged the knife into the breast of the young girl piercing her heart thoroughly. From the altar a strange red glow began to fill the room, and the man raised both his arms above his head. The light grew in intensity, and the man’s entire body began to convulse and twitch silently. The blood trailed down the man’s arm to cover his shoulder, and from where the camera was angled it appeared as though he were bleeding from his left ribs. He tossed his head back almost as though he were laughing, and in the eerie red glow of the room, there was a single word freshly carved into his forehead. “Aezir”.
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