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The Feind House: Part Six

9/13/2015

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Written & Created By
Kenny Stark Udar

Marisa had packed the sandwiches Donna had supplied, as well as the hammer and nails into her bag and headed towards the house, turning her camera on. What follows is a description of what was found on the tape. 

The camera bounced and bobbed as she walked to the house. She set the camera down to apply the crowbar to the boards and pull them off. She then picked the camera up and zoomed it into the dark house. In the sunlight, she could see something gleaming on the back wall of the room, near the door. She even panned over the door a few times. She then climbs in through the now opened window into the room itself. 

She panned the room again, this time with the aid of her flashlight and we notice that she has made her entrance into a bedroom. She swings her camera back just as clouds pass over the sun, and we can see the house visibly grow darker. She turns back again towards the back wall and approaches it cautiously. 

At first glance, nothing in this sequence seems amiss. It is only upon further inspection that one notices what Marisa failed to.

Outlined in the doorway of the room after she enters it, there is a tall and dark Shape that slowly pulled out of sight beyond the doorway.

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