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Kenny Stark Udar
Marisa stood beneath the tree, and dug the toe of her white sneakers into the dirt beneath the tree, waiting with some trepidation for the ritual to begin. The sun began to descend, and soon it was 3 PM. Marisa watched as the first of the three figures arrived, carrying a crowbar. She said nothing as James approached her. "Who dares to approach the House of Feind?" he asked in a deep and low tone. Marisa spoke clearly, "Marisa Goldberg." "Does she have the courage to take this crowbar in hand?" he asked. Marisa spoke, her head held high, "I do." James held out the crowbar and Marisa took it. They waited fifteen minutes before the next hooded figure showed up carrying a flashlight. "Who dares to enter the House of Feind?" Will asked. "Marisa Goldberg," James spoke before she had a chance to. "Does she have the will to enter the House of Feind?" Will asked. James and Will looked to her expectantly, and she responded, "I do." Will handed her the flashlight and she took it. They waited fifteen minutes before the next hooded figure showed up carrying the hammer, some nails, and a few boards. "Who dares to probe the secrets of the House of Feind?" asked Donna. "Marisa Goldberg," the other two said in unison. "Does she have the loyalty not to oust her fellows?" the girl asked. This time, Marisa knew she was supposed to answer for herself, and she did. "I do." The hooded figure handed her the items and joined the other two in front of Marisa. In unison, they said, "Go forth into the House of Feind. May God be with you." Marisa smiled, the ritual complete, and headed towards the Feind House, flicking on her camera.
Kenny Stark Udar
Marisa stood beneath the tree, and dug the toe of her white sneakers into the dirt beneath the tree, waiting with some trepidation for the ritual to begin. The sun began to descend, and soon it was 3 PM. Marisa watched as the first of the three figures arrived, carrying a crowbar. She said nothing as James approached her. "Who dares to approach the House of Feind?" he asked in a deep and low tone. Marisa spoke clearly, "Marisa Goldberg." "Does she have the courage to take this crowbar in hand?" he asked. Marisa spoke, her head held high, "I do." James held out the crowbar and Marisa took it. They waited fifteen minutes before the next hooded figure showed up carrying a flashlight. "Who dares to enter the House of Feind?" Will asked. "Marisa Goldberg," James spoke before she had a chance to. "Does she have the will to enter the House of Feind?" Will asked. James and Will looked to her expectantly, and she responded, "I do." Will handed her the flashlight and she took it. They waited fifteen minutes before the next hooded figure showed up carrying the hammer, some nails, and a few boards. "Who dares to probe the secrets of the House of Feind?" asked Donna. "Marisa Goldberg," the other two said in unison. "Does she have the loyalty not to oust her fellows?" the girl asked. This time, Marisa knew she was supposed to answer for herself, and she did. "I do." The hooded figure handed her the items and joined the other two in front of Marisa. In unison, they said, "Go forth into the House of Feind. May God be with you." Marisa smiled, the ritual complete, and headed towards the Feind House, flicking on her camera.
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